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oh....my....This one made me cry Brad. At first I was crying when Kyle and Jon kissed and then again when they were talking to each other and now...well I don't know if he's dead or not but I cried A LOT. oh my God if Jon is dead...I don't know what I'd do! Of course I'll still read, that's just a given but OMG, this is just sooooo depressing. You did such a wonderful and beautiful job of showing it though, that is if Jon is really dead. even if he isn't this scene was so greatly done I think I might have cried for that. Everything came together perfectly, Brad. I understand all I need to at this moment and well, I'm of course DYING to read the next one!!! *sigh* You're endings are spectacular! *hugs* Now write more please!! Great Job Brad!!
~Rieda
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Wowers. That's all I have to say.