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*strangles Ariel* Ah! She shot Jon, you have to be kidding me! Everytime she hurts him it's like unbelievable to me. How could someone just hurt Jon and then live with themselves? I mean, I never liked Ariel...but still. In general how many people can just hurt him like that? Something is seriously wrong with that woman. I think she needed to go to Dr. Haaser for some help. (lol, that's a joke. He needs to stay dead)
And ah, those letters to Kyle were so cute and sad. I enjoy hearing more about his past, he's an interesting little specimen.
Off to read more! Great job!
~Rieda
gar. I hate Ariel. And this is beyond the hate I had for Sarah xD This is serious wtf is wrong with you? hate. With a capital H!
Poor Jon...he better not die. And these letters, and his grandpa, and "This is who we are"?
Now that I've caught up, I'll say what I always do: I want more.