Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
139,536 Literary Works • 672,600 Reviews
Look I'm reading again!
oooh I love emotions and random guys injecting stuff into jon.... ^_^ I have nothing else to say really...not actually a critique.
Ummm good job? Yes!
This was great! Kyle cried! and did Jon...just realize what was going on with him? Haha, that's really sad, he didn't get to see any of Kyle's real feelings as soon as he showed them. And Jon is captured again! This is getting better and better by the minute!
Loved it! Now I have another to read so that's it!
~Rieda