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I really like the chapters you have set up like documentaries, although this one had me somewhat confused. I get it but I'm not entirely sure what it is...speaking of. Oh well, I'll survive, right? I think my more-than-normally slow brain is being its usual self.
"other" hee hee. "Others". More LOST references!
This was really good. A lot more feeling than the other two camera Pro.s.
Loved it!
In the lens: a woman with her eyes rolled back into her skull, brutal bite marks on her clothes and limbs, her mouth agape. It would have whined, but the ship soon depressurized, creativing an aboslute vaccuum and sucking the sound out of the hull.
*This is my favorite part. It sounded bad enough with the description you gave in the previous chapters but with this added, I can REALLY how awful the aftermath of the explosion was.*shivers* Tis Great!
~Rieda