This was brilliant! Personally as a writer, I've learned( from professional advice) that spelling errors aren't as important as getting your story, setting, characters, etc. in order which is what you did. Not only that, but you also showed brains which is great. You showed that you had background infomation and did your research. And also, you put it into interesting and intruiging dialog. I couldn't stop reading! Great job.
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