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That was wicked awesome. I finally here the title of your story being put into play and it isn't even what I would have guessed. The way you described it made me want chionophobia. lol. I loved how you put Sarah in this, she acted like she still felt love for Jon but then you realize that she's a killer. WOW. Can't wait for you next. I'm incredibly desperate.
*Screams* BRAD I HATE YOU SO MUCH!
intoBut I love Ch so much... *melts with love* wtf? She wants to have the fear of snow? *screws up eyes* I hate so you much! I can't wait a week! *sobs*
Anyway....
To me, being precise and unnatural is odd. precise is like exact. unnatural makes me think of someone walking very strange and not "exact". They just don't fit together for me. Maybe they do for you?
I really want an explanation sometime soon. And a real hard back copy. But that can wait.