Hi, Charlottejoness here for a review!
I really liked reading this poem it is very unique and different to other love poems. However, in order to make it even better, I think you should add in either some stanzas or punctuation. I like how it runs on from each line however, it can become too much. Enjambment is always good with a reasoning behind it.
Keep up the really good work
Points: 91
Reviews: 12
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