Hi, J here for a review.
This was a very real poem about a very real subject matter and that's what makes it so great. You talk about a young boy who gets out of there before things get bad for him and it's so emotional. It also poses a lot of unanswered questions like "What would have happend to him if he didn't get out?" and "How what happend to his mother?". Actually your entire poem poses questions I can think of at least ten that needs to be answered "Who is the person that he stands before?" "How did he save countless lives?". Like I said this is a wonderful poem with a great background story, but there needs to be more.
Good Job and Keep Writing!!
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