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I found amazing work again?!
You are seriously a very talented writer if we talk about poetries or short stories. I had not seen work of your which a bit longer than the usual short ones but I am sure you are good at writing longer pieces also. You always have that smooth flow and well thought of rhyme, which may sounds strange, but it is really not that easy to do it. May not be a useful review for which I am really sorry. But this work needs no corrections.
This work expressed the sadness and the depression every single onle of us had felt at least once in their life when no one is here to help and we are alone.

This is a really sad poem showing on the lonliness you feel inside from this. I do enjoy the the rhyme scheme you put in here and the metaphors used too. It makes me wonder what that would be like to be all alone like that. It shows how the fear of being lonely scares people very much, and also shows how people act. Keep on writing, Bayleef 153.

Hiya again, Speaker ^-^ Happy review day yet again haha! (and goooo Tsunami Tyrants!)
Alrightyroo, ANYWAYS! I’ve come to give you a very personal and in-depth appraisal of your piece, and would advise you to take it very seriously, seeing as how all of my opinions are simply riveting and action-packed and I am highly verered amoungst our kind.
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Hehehe :p JK! Okiedokie! Firstly, I tell everyone this: I adore poetry and always take time to dissect them pretty vigilantly, so feel free to ask me to review your work at any time ^-^ This is simply lovely and I admire your skill for crafting it together. I’ve told you many times and I’ll tell you again, you have a spectacular talent for writing and have impressive word- management skills. Everything is perfectly consistent and well written. You always create mental-images in my head and have a lot of imagination simply by your word choices.
I don’t have much to say aside form well done for the thousandth time. You’re a gem of a writer and I always look forward to your wring. Well done, keep writing, and do your best!
~Catnip

Hi there!

I said I would look at your work so here I am! (sorry for the delay)

Firstly I would like to say well done for creating this amazing poem! You have a very strong voice in terms of character and the stanzas flowed perfectly! (And I know how hard it is to achieve that so well done!)

This poem pretty much sums up what I feel like at school, I could really connect and relate to this piece, which is probably why I love it so much.

In terms of criticism all I ca say is that there was an odd sentence which did not flow so smoothly: "I'll be there alone" I think you should and in one extra syllable for example "I'll be there all alone" ? Just a suggestion but it's nothing to worry over!

Overall this poem I think was amazing! You did an awesome job with conveying tone and character and the rhyming was great!

Keep this up! I look forward to reading more!



~*Annapurna*~

I loved it!!! Sometimes i feel like that too! I wrote a poem like this the other day but it wasn't this long! I think you should write more!!!! I would read all of your other poems! Can you let us request some things for you too right about?

I have a few ideas!
MAybe like being alone,
and needing someone to turn too! But still that was awesome!! Definetly keep wrighting!! Inbox me if you write more!

Speakerskat Speakerskat
This was a great poem
I really enjoyed reading it and it was easy to read. It flowed well. The rhyme scheme was always consistent too. It was really deep too.

My favorite! You should do more styled like this, it's righteous. You would never believe where you get your inspiration from. Lool, when you told me it was from an E.R room I was like ... o.o. xD Yeah but I love this one.