Goofy

Heya Speakerskat!!

This is Eros here!!

The topic of your poem reminds me of a cartoon which I used to see when I was a kid...Scooby Dooby dooo...In that one of the character was named Goofy. Anyways this show has nothing to with your poem. I guess this poem is composed on a litttle boy.You have described him in a very beautiful way.It contains a mixture of romance expressed in a humorous way. to write a poem in a mixture of two emotions is really appreciable. I appreciate you and your lovely work.

This poem describes the kid very minutely showing that you are a minute or a good observer.The way of smiling, naughtiness everything is described best.

The second last and the third last stanzas describes the naughtiness.

You have also used different words to express a same thing like prank and mischief describes naughtiness. I loved it.

Overall the poem was really cute and it was filled with Romance and Humour and I had funn read

Nice piece of work here. Especially when you mention small things like the glint in his eye or the way he gets into trouble. Its descriptive, interesting, and funny all at the same time. This is a fun piece of work for you to write im sure. second off i want to say how much i love this piece of work. It's funny, well-worded and descriptive. It really makes me see how this person really looks and acts. I would really like to see you work on more like this.

write on, Bayleef153.

I found this very humorous. I can tell you that this would be how many people feel. I definitely want to read more of your writing. A massive well done, also I can't think of anything to change about it as I really liked it.
Once again well done and keep it up.
Gothgirl

You calling me a goof? Just kidding.
I really love this poem, as soon as I started reading, I couldn't stop. The rights are so perfect and they make perfect sence while being used together. I tell, you if you were a famous poet, I would have used this for my poetry project last month an I would have gotten an A++ instead of an A+, Becuase of the way I could read this with perfect expression. Anyway, great job, no mistakes. Keep up th great works!
~Dark

I like this poem. It expresses very well how you feel about this kid. I love this part:

"Watch what you say,
Careful what you do,
Or else I might find,
I'm in trouble with you!"

Perfection! I love it! Keep up the good work!
~Racket

Hi, Speakerskat ^-^ (yayy for Tsunami Tyrants)
Hi yet again, Niteowl =p (yayy for Tsunami Tyrants)
Alrightyroo, I’m here to give you a review and maybe some personal opinions and all that pretty stuff like thattt :3
Firstly, the reason behind the piece is so cool. I found the word-usage to flow so humanly and they sounded beautiful in their own way. Lovely writing methods and technique, your word-choice is pure fashion c:


The piece doesn’t sound strained or artificial by any means—on the contrary, it streams out so efficiently and effortlessly. It sounded perfectly natural and overall, sensational job. I can’t give you any advice on how to improve it, it’s marked with your own air and style.
I can’t rise above how wonderfully stitched together the first part was! Very lovely, and aside from encouraging you to continue, I’m a useless tool to you ._. (sorry)
Keep writing, and good luck!
Catnip~

Wow! this poem was really good. I like the fact of how you express yourself and the rhyming was very good other than that i enjoyed it.

Nice job. I like the hints of a crush going on there. But be careful, because although your rhym scheme was consistent, some of the flow was sacrificed. You may want to shorten a few of the longer lines or break the up. Count the syllables in each line and you may see where some lines need help.

Nice Poem, It flows easily and is very descriptive.

Wow great poem Speakerskat!!! I love the thought you put ino this !! The way you described him was phenomenal!! Great adjectives and it flowed really nicely it wasn't choppy and it was creative. Your rhymes were fantastic. Overall it was a great poem and I loved it.