A beautiful spirit
Of such passionate music
Embraces the soul.
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She is the essence
Of every orchestration
Ever created.
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Composing wishes
Intoxicating the mind
Melodies entrance.
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She is purely sound
The mother of symphony
Needing no guidance.
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Tunes that make men cry
And thaw the coldest hearts
Maiden of music.
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Love at the first tone
Every single note, flawless
Elegant, graceful.
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Warm pillows of song
She stirs up ballads of fate
Tragic and joyous.
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This child of dreams
Born and raised in lullaby
Sweet Symphonia.
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beautifully written the poem in itself seems almost musical. In love with the structure of the poem you allow your reader to catch his/her breath after each stanza(thumbs up on your technique)
This was truly a beautiful piece. Your use of figurative language was just amazing. You describing music to a actual human female was so creative and interesting. It was truly captivating when you said
"Love at first tone
Every single note, flawless
Elegant, graceful"
Which is the epitome of how all young women should be (Elegant and graceful)
You truly have talent... Continue to write.
Beautiful poem. Music can definitely be a very important thing for some people, myself included. You really expressed your passion for music in this poem. You really showed how important it is to you. Hope to see more of your poems soon.
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Hello, priceofwords here!
You have really summed up what I love about Haikus in your work here. Simple, yet artfully crafted. All of your words fit together really nicely, creating an amazing effect of imagery.
In particular, your last stanza,
'This child of dreams
Born and raised in lullaby
Sweet Symphonia,'
just blew me away. A fantastic end to the piece.
I can find no faults here. Just keep doing what you're doing and whatever it is will be amazing. I really look forward to reading more of your work.
Keep writing!
priceofwords