Oh my goodness! This is just about the most interesting poem I've ever read! Its so true, and yet shown in such a funny way that I can't help but laugh. I really love the rhyme scheme and how it all flows together. Its pure genius. Keep writing!
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I’m a poet,
And I know it,
And I’m not afraid to show it.
I talk about persuasion,
Like mathematicians and equation,
No need for a vocation,
When I’ve got my punctuation.
I'm writing a rhyme,
While you’re wasting time,
In a Wal-Mart line.
Don’t you get tired?
Of not being admired,
I’m writing a satire,
While you’re getting fired.
When you’re shoveling snow,
I’ll be on a show,
Talking about my poetic flow.
So go and boast,
“I can make toast”,
To my show’s host,
Except we poets have the most.
That’s why I’m a poet,
And now you know it,
And this is how I show it!
Oh my goodness! This is just about the most interesting poem I've ever read! Its so true, and yet shown in such a funny way that I can't help but laugh. I really love the rhyme scheme and how it all flows together. Its pure genius. Keep writing!
Hi Speakerskat!!
This is Eros here!
I loved and enjoyed reading your poem " I am A Poet ". I appriciate your straightforwardness.You say that:~
"I’m a poet,
And I know it,
And I’m not afraid to show it."
It shows that if you are a poet what is the need of hiding it? You are a poet indeed.You have composed a beautiful poem.
This has got many rhyming words.
You have added a grace and completed the meaning of your poem by mentioning the reason as to why you are a poet.
There is no flaw as far as I can see.
I loved your pem.Keep writing for we want to read more such stuff.
Haha, this was great. I kept thinking to myself I wouldn't like your rhymes and I'd get tired of them, especially since they started with the most annoying and over-said couplet in the entire poetic world, but I actually really dug them! I loved how it referenced pop culture and lives while still staying sassy.
You juust... you did kind of lose it at the end, which is completely understandable. You start with a perfect thing, keep hitting it strong, but eventually you might run out of steam. Here's the problem:
Except we poets have the most.
That’s why I’m a poet,
And now you know it,
And this is how I show it!
Alright! I didn't know to expect that! Good job!
XD You are indeed 'A poet'
a very interest way to go about it.
I’m a poet,
And I know it,
And I’m not afraid to show it.
A very odd, effective statement. IT works well. =3
I talk about persuasion,
Like mathematicians and equation,
No need for a vocation,
When I’ve got my punctuation.
A lot of imagery, and a very clear way to project it. =3 Nice nice.
I'm writing a rhyme,
While you’re wasting time,
In a Wal-Mart line.
I do not like this stanza, not one bit.
To each their own?
Don’t you get tired?
Of not being admired,
I’m writing a satire,
While you’re getting fired.
Again, the nice sensible poem went out the window -.-;
When you’re shoveling snow,
I’ll be on a show,
Talking about my poetic flow.
It went from poetry to rap, but still, now we're getting back there, a nice twist.
So go and boast,
“I can make toast”,
To my show’s host,
Except we poets have the most.
What do we have?
That’s why I’m a poet,
And now you know it,
And this is how I show it!
It ended a little bit weird. =3
IT started out nice, but it needs some work. Even though it's satire, it should be clear. Not saying that this is clear.
Hellllo I (Who loves poetry and is one of my specialties) Would love to do a small review for you welll here goees sorry if I did anything wrong in this here but please point out any problems if you seee any anyway this is short and for review day.
I hope it helped.
This is more like a sing song sort of thing I have herd a song that is much like this but it is about something else.I’m a poet,
And I know it,
And I’m not afraid to show it.
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