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    Someone called her name,but she didn't reply...she never replies at anyonenot even to her own childrenShe stands by the window,watching the cars go by...they always go by to everyoneeven to ...

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  • Johnny...So Very Lonely

    Alert and alive!Johnny stands upLooks out of the windowWithout passion or loveHe never criesHe only ever stares into nothingHe once had everythingHe used to have somethingHis mother who kissed himHis ...

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  • White America

    I pledge allegiance to the flagOf the United states of White AmericaAmerica- the land of the freeAmerica- the land of the pigs who bleedAmerica- the home of the braveAmerica- formerly ...

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  • When Will It End?

    Fingers shattered and legs covered with scarsFaces dripping with spots and surrounded with marksI can hear the slight thumps pulsing in my heartQuestion is- when will it end?The nights that ...

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  • IfTonyBlairToldTheTruthForOneDayOurWorldWouldFallApart

    Ignorance is strengthFor the fun of itTime is ticking awayOnly the insiders knowNo more Mr. Nice GuyYouth destroyedBallistic and primitveLiars and thievesAnd you will suffer tooIraq and AfghanistanRul

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  • Blood

    Dripping down my face once moreThe hollow eyes, the shallow whoreThe wallpaper is crumbling, a motel for sureTeardrops like rain and bloodlines tornSitting on a bed so rusty and torn ...

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  • Garden Of Words

    Garden of words and flowers of bloodThe other words to describe our loveInto the trees and buried in my headLife can never surpass the reality Of ever being deadEat your ...

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  • Richey Edwards

    Yesterday was the first time I listened to the Manic Street Preachers in two years. Don't get me wrong, to those MSP fans, it must be a crime. But not ...

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  • Slip Away

    Eternal sleep...the suffering more fears;I shall not worryBut how will they react:happy, sad, petrified?Not even had a chanceto say goodbye to herMaybe it's for the best

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  • Words Take Me

    Words take me happens all the timeWords take me makes out the crimeI cannot imagine security at it's mostBut words take me up out of this worldBeauty suffering- the essence ...

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  • The Riots Have Started (strong language)

    Spoiler! : In case some people don't know, in my hometown of London, there are riots going on, where about 450 have been arrested and possibly some people killed. This ...

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    Ok, I've only just came back from Ireland, after an endless week comforting my mum and watching someone in a coffin who was soon to be cremated. 7 days I ...

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  • Just The Five Of Us

    Spoiler! : This was a script I wrote 3 years ago. It is flawed in places and fairly short, so don't expect anything up to the standard you expect from ...

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  • Xenophobia

    A kiss on the cheekA faithful reawakeningAll the happy facesTo get me out of sightRed eyes to glareAnd a soul mate to killA silent renditionOf the art of murderShe lied ...

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  • Detachment

    Persistence is the ultimate barrierFor the arguments of one's sacred lawTo give you my own reflectionTo show the immovable flawProtection of another's kissesSo father is in my cold eyeA sudden ...

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  • Drowning Too Soon...?

    Preserve my arrowsPreserve the memoryI'm drowning too soonI'm not fit to go onI can't talk to youI cannot touch you Two months in limboWhen I come backI apologise if I'm ...

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  • Untitled

    So I woke up todayAnd had the worst feelingMy nails are filthyMy eyes are splittingSo tonight will be the nightAnd the heart will be the spotAll I need to do ...

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  • Short Poems #1

    Spoiler! : These short poems are either incomplete or deliberately short. I have done it this way so I don't waste 100 points for a 3-4 line poem. I will ...

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  • A Void

    The walls have trapped meContained inside a voidYour "wisdom" is ignoranceYou prey off people's fearsBut your strengths aren't my weaknessesYour long gaze into a lifeless abyssLives up to your voyeuri

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  • Gaddafi Sleeps

    I dedicate these wordsCold, harsh, twisted wordsTo a tyrant now rotting awayIn his own personal tomb of decayGaddafi sleeps in a pool of bloodA web of lies without any loveA ...

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  • The Window

    Life will not go on, his eyes are so hollowA cold word comes out of his desperate mouthWhere he would cry is the same place they raised himAnd laughter is ...

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  • Fit

    This isn't a conditionThis is more like a curseStrobe lights that persistVoices that screamA light that sends me awayThose images that swirlParticular visions of hellA particular smell catches my eyeT

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  • The Call Girl [1]

    1. Whatever happened to my life? Before you ask, I’m not for sale you fucking jerk. Before you slap me, call me a whore, argue with me over the price ...

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  • We Are Strangers

    So schizophrenicThe idea is burntThe time is now stretchingA crash back to EarthI will listen to you nowI will give you somethingHave some water And have some chancesSay you tried ...

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  • Hear No Silence

    When you see the sign,you'd want to cross the one soon knows whyurban decay takes holdThere is never silence;the cars and the machines,the traffic outside at night,the flickers of another ...

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  • Short Poems #2

    Everything's So Tender NowI found your name on my handWritten down with a penThe ink is like a tattoo of shameHiding away from it allIt's like a kiss of hatredAnd ...

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  • Temptation

    I tried hard not to touchI promised to myselfHer heart was not guardedCouldn't redeem myselfStabbed you deep in the backTo see your reactionYour heart wasn't quite readyFor the satisfactionAnd now ...

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  • The Baby Burns

    Oh foetusYour fingers so delicateYou will never know your fatherWhat is your agenda?Born out of one mother's lieAnd at your birth he will not showAt your birth he will not ...

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  • Change Of Mood....Change Of Thoughts

    You should smile way more oftenIt gets me on such a highFlash forward to the morningAnd I wish I want to dieMy brain in all directionsI cannot begin to tellYou ...

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  • Remembrance Day

    Remember themEveryone one of themMore every day as I writeEmboddied in our tearsMany more will pay the priceBravery on the frontRain fell in their memoriesAnd so we pay tributeNow is ...

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  • Her Parents Are Xenophobes And She Knows It

    Their tradition with layers of racismPicking on me because I am not like themGoing as far as to send you awayHoping we never re-meet another dayI'm not allowed a single ...

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  • No Cure

    There is no cure to force.They'll always be a place.When our dreams snap in two,All of our hopes are shattered.Cure...for the love;It means everything.Cure...for the love;It would be just nothing.And ...

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  • Filter

    All this expectationAll paths to my own cellA pleasure that always shakesThe very core of my heartYou are too good for meYou don't deserve a mouse like meI'm borderline anorexicNo ...

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  • Repent

    Life is becoming a struggleLife is becoming a struggleThat flash on the screenDraining you and meLife is becoming a struggleLife is becoming a struggleRight here right nowRight here right nowRight ...

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  • Inevitable Departure

    This was bound to happenDeparting for an important causeAnd advancing in the worldOh, how the world makes me feelYou have been a great friendAny friend of mine is part of ...

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  • The Prototype (stick man playing alone outside)

    Stupid motherfucker took my spot;he thinks he is some sort of Godand I know he isn't. So before youspit at my face, acknowledge whoyou are talking to.Idiotic counsellor gave me ...

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  • Kick Them When They Fall Down

    What do you doto people weaker than you?Kick them when they fall down.How do youget rid of anomalies?Kick them when they fall down.How do you cure?How do you sleep?How do ...

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  • It's Christmas! (WARNING: pointless swearing and sarcasm)

    I need coffee;the city is tight.It's a Christmas partyand the night is right.I wish to sacrificemy days and my nightsto get it all perfect-to get it all right.This party sure ...

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  • Suicide Attempt #19

    I have attempted suicide.If you knew me, and if I told you, you would know this. To be precise, too many times to count. Even if it is just looking ...

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  • Shut Me Up Before I Say Something Very Debauched

    Spoiler! : This poem is for Mikko Shut me up,before I say somethingvery debauched indeed.If I ask you, "want to hearwhat I did to an idol of mine?"Tell me no ...

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  • Arrogant American (ages 16+)

    Spoiler! : My Beatles style song, inspired by a blog by Sherly. Sent my letter of divorceStraight through a faxNow I've got a strong mindedGirl up my ass What can ...

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  • Dear Nicki

    I must confess I have no interest at all in your jobI'm a voyeur you might get them quite a lotBut tell me "stop" and I will have to screw ...

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  • Stupid Idea

    I don't know where you stand,but it must be knownthat I have a problem.I think it must be shown.But will you desert me,let me go astray?You said it'll be secret;you ...

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  • The Eye That Protects You Whilst Asleep

    Don't fall asleep just yetThe night is still violently coldAwaiting you when you dreamAwaiting you in your deepest sleepDon't hesitate to keep your eyes openThe night is so vile and ...

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  • Walk Through The Fields

    Speak only in tongues.Don't cross my mind.Nor cross any of my paths.Just continue walking,please be silent and walk.Look at the trees now.Look at the sky.Prepare for this cold rainfall.We walk ...

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  • A Bisexual's Opinion On Life

    Spoiler! : I may use this for an upcoming novel- who knows? There was a door I had to step into. I had to dissect myself with my own knife. ...

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  • Audrey Hepburn Kills Zombies Without Ruining Her Hair- pt 1

    She woke up to survey the wreckage. All burnt to a crisp, the area where trees once stood is now where the brown leaves flourish. Where the buildings full of ...

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  • Template

    The young men,they waste their youth,to inhale;to look special.Times have changed.Standards have dropped.They're smoking;to catch our eyes.She has changed,and wasting life-to look "cool".She wants to

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  • Sweet Sweet Air

    Spoiler! : For Mikko. My attempt at something happy. Rip it to shreds if you please Such a wonderful sight,it brightens up once again.The sweet sweet air comes nearand removes ...

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  • Complete Disintegration

    My crumbles.Red seas.Like sinking.A dream.Why heart.Drained of blood.Blue eyes.Like crying.A thought.Who is there?Contrast;irony.Your love.Repeater.Green grass.Like nature.A kiss.What am I?Malice;nihi

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  • Hi There Mikko

    Spoiler! : Written on the eve of our wedding (2 minutes before LOL) What I thinkI think sweetAnd it's just like some sugarBetween my teethYou know just howWhite your dress ...

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  • Genetic Makeup (1/10)

    Spoiler! : Theme one: Identity I am who I am.I see what I see.I hear what I hear.I am human.I like what I like.I love what I love.I feel what ...

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  • Fugazi- 13 Songs

    Spoiler! : 1. Waiting Room: 2. Bulldog

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  • Rebellion Against The Pigs

    Burn down your Union Jack And burn down your US flag The stars and stripes in piles of ash The stars and stripes wiped on my ass Kill pigs Cut ...

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  • To The Rubble

    It had to be me, to clear up this mess. No need to feel guilt, it's just the first batch. Still, hollow eyes stare- like there is no faith. There ...

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  • Beach (2/10)

    Washed up on the hard shore. My shoulders cold, sensation. My eyes peer all over my body. I have found myself now. The reflection in the rock pool- the lonely ...

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  • Darkest Hour

    She was always loved Yet she didn't know, she couldn't take It anymore so, where did she grow up? I have yet to find, find out a reason Drowned into ...

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  • Get Away

    Hi mirror. Talk to me. I need some advice, problems overwhelm me. But people don't listen- so they need a talking to. She said she needs some more time. Yet ...

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  • Confession.

    Talk to me mirror. What do you want? Who do you require? Should I forget? Layered in regret? Is it for better? Or for decay? These fruits lay bare Onto ...

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  • I Can Prove It (3/10)

    I know more than you. I make conclusions, that help pave the way, for others to learn. I know all theories: Big Bang, Doppler, Time. Black Holes, you name it. ...

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  • Obsession Vs. Affection

    She's got the look. But does she know? She's got the mind. But how does she cope? I love her face. I love her clothes. The kind of face, that ...

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  • Lifes Got Me In Its Pocket (protest poem)

    Snatching the babys hand. For lifes not what I love. Its the peoples choice. Its democracy and love. Adams protest: No apostrophe. I can bend language. All days of the ...

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  • Holy Foetus (WARNING: potentially offensive. Ages 16+ only.)

    I don't have the time. I don't need this now. Awful decision: Death vs. career. Why should I do it? But, why shouldn't I? Murder my baby, or murder my ...

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  • Bi

    Time to go back to the drawing board. "There are two people, man! Gay and straight! You're either one or the other, man! Be a dude or be a fag! ...

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  • Presence

    Leave me for the dogs. Leave me be. Leave me for the ghosts. Babies and their dads. Babies cry. Babies and their mums. Me and my problems. Me and you. ...

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  • Letter To This Unknown Lover

    "Shiny happy people holding hands..."

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  • This Hate

    Ever had the feeling you've been cheated?

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  • Tongue In Cheek (ONLY 18 AND OVERS MAY VIEW. CONTAINS RACIST SLANG BUT ONLY FOR EFFECT.)

    Heh. Me moaning about something I know little about.

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  • The Cure- Faith

    Another album review

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  • I Am No Whore

    Inspired by The Ruined Maid

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  • Short Poems #3

    Formulaic The young man. Cold. Dead to me. When did it all go right? Meet the girl. Kiss her lips. Take her down. By the hips. Sentenced now. Behind bars. ...

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  • Long Distance

    OMG! I WROTE A LOVE SONG!

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  • I'm Gonna Make You Laugh

    Bad attempt at a Beatles-esque song.

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  • The Seeds Of Evil

    Over there they talk about their plans. Over there it's soon to die inside. By the lake the clearest water is crimson. Painted red by the blood of the innocent. ...

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  • Crazy

    Conversational piece.

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  • Slump

    Distressed: down in a hole People: they'll never know Friendships: they never last Lovers: dead as the snow In a slump. Nothing to do. In a slump.

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    I tell ya. It was hard fitting in. Ask my mother- I didn't eat at school till I was 6 years old. I had to repeat a year at Reception. ...

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  • What If She Is A Homophobe?

    So far, so good. She seems to be the one. So far, alright. She knows she is the one. Atlhough things may Take a turn for the worse. She may ...

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  • Acoustic Song

    I wrote a song. Not a love song. Nor hate, nor death. Just a short song. A tune,to speak. To make your week. To make a link. It's on the ...

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  • The Unreadable

    Inspired by Samuel Beckett. Proceed with caution.

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  • Animal Rae Face (Chasing Lions)

    WTH. Seriously. WTH. I'm willing to give ten pounds for whomever finds a suitable meaning. I mean, dang. WTH.

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  • Leviathan At The Gate

    My first posted piece of week in exactly a year :O

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  • Holographic

    For people to dissect on Review Day

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  • Flares

    Heh. 'Bout time this one was posted.

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  • Aokigahara

    For all you Review Dayers who just love to dissect and nitpick :P

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  • Tower of Pleasure

    "A mulatto! An albino! A mosquito! My libido! YEAH!"

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  • International Tearducts On Parade

    My best song....?

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  • episode

    For all of you Review Day folks who love to pick apart pieces with no punctuation.

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  • Gay Fairyland

    Inspired by "A New Heaven" and "The Next War" by Wilfred Owen.

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  • The Death Puppy
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  • Birthday For 99 Lonely Wasps
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  • Dead Seed

    Heroin is a bad drug

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  • Thermal Expansion (The Burning Man)

    Don't play with matches

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  • Chairs

    Torture for dummies :D

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  • "I Can Taste You"/Vanilla
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  • Doctrine To Eliminate Alien Species For Good & Forever

    I am not in the mood for being treated like dirt

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  • Vulnerable
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  • Bipolar

    For someone very close to me (and for all y'all Review Day warriors)

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  • A Seat Rouge

    "That's the lowdown."

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  • Gun To The Head

    Don't lose your head.

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  • Conversation With A Tw@

    An awfully done experiment.

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  • Apostrophe #4

    Pretentious much?

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  • Redecoration

    "Increased eye candy"

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  • Wild And Young
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  • A Pandamonium Extravaganza

    D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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  • Lisa Thorn
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  • Jazz Hands
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  • Tiny Murder Gangs

    From the perspective of a young boy in the then-newly partitioned Ireland (1922), unsure of whether to side with pro-treaty or anti-treaty.

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  • Tears Of A Pathetic Clown

    BAD OLD WORK ALERT

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  • Another Youth Anthem
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  • Dominatrix

    Love can hurt sometimes.

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  • Red Waltz For Red Folk
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  • Death Scene
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  • The Last Time

    For someone.

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  • A New Martyr
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  • The Great Departure

    With help from my fiancée. :)

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  • Petty Bourgeois Leanings
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  • Stabbing Mannequins Is So 2005

    "Summerholidays vs. punkroutine"

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  • And then it goes
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