There was a door I had to step into. I had to dissect myself with my own knife. I had to cut myself open to let it all out. Cockroaches in my mind, scorpion venom for eyes. This is hardly the outline of a teenager. It isn't a phase. I am not this to be cool and trendy. I am who I am. Born like this? I can only shrug in response to that question. So before you point the finger at me, you should first find out about the person you are about to point at. My story must be known. If you don't like what I think, or you have other ideas on how I shall live my life, I am sorry- I can never change. I am not a faggot. I am human. Just like you. Just like everyone.
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I am taking this as a blurb, or a pitch for your potential novel? Did you ever do anything with this? Because it is a really strong premise about a taboo topic that society should definitely have their eyes wide open to. Go on... redefine the genre... break the rules and write this.
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Hey it is Bigmacloves here for another review,
Honestly this was a great piece of literature. I thought this was amazing. I really do hope that you write a novel/book or even a series based off this piece of literature. So I simply look at the sky, take off my hat, hold it to my heart, and solute you. So all I have left to say is good luck.
AJ, ignore them. They aren't worth a second. They just judge, but their judgement doesnt count. What counts is how you look at yourself. You know I love you AJbro, as what you suggested to me once, let it pass through the other ear
Love you Adambro!
I just want you to know that the people who are going to judge you really aren't worth listening to at all, and I know how hard that is to follow, but they really don't matter.
One of my closest friends is bisexual, and there was a certain boy at our school who told him extremely unnecessary and ignorant things and called him every slang word in the book. My friend ignored him, but later bursts into tears. I have never been so angry in my life.
So I guess what I'm saying is I get it, and people won't judge you here.