Short Poems #1

I really didn't know what you meant by "short," but you covered it. These are all really good either way, though. In my opinion because you're actually pretty good. If you maybe just give more imagery you can make them longer and more entertaining. Other than that these were quite enjoyable and quick to read.

~wtbh

Hey there, I must say that these are really short but sometimes less is more, right. I understand not wanting to waste 100 points for just one 3-4 line poem.

First off, I like these, the seventh one espcially. A good few of these are worth developing futher, deffinately the seventh one (I really did like this one).
For whatever reason I found the Dear Stepdad one vaguely amusing, I know for a fact I shouldn't but it just reminded me so much of someone I know and it's exactly what they'd say. I think it's quite true of some who are getting or have got a step father, they usually are quite protective of there mother, especially if they haven't had a dad for some time.
I like the first one, but I feel the swearing a bit unnecessary. I know it adds effect, but still... Personally I'd write it from the person who actually is under strict law and develope it futher. The first two lines are my personal favourites, they just convay a sense of sarcasm and strictness that I love.
My absolute favourite is the final/seventh one though. For m it rings true because I myself have seen those who are 'nothing special' and are actually used as scapegoats, if something goes wrong it just has to be there fault regardless if they were involved or not.

Please do keep writing, and I hope this has helped. Even just a little. Love Beth x.