Published February 14, 2012
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I like this poem, Adam i really do. It has a nice flow to it, keeps going leading to other things to lead to the last stanza i think it is (i forgot)
"Someone must die."
Its kind of creepy, but its is a good kind of creepy. Keep writing, Adam, for i cant wait to read more!