Hi, just wanted to give a quick review!
So over all the poem is great! the message i'm assuming is along the lines of how two people can be two opposites, one who despite the situation does the opposite of what is expected, usually staying positive in most situations and the other, well i'm not quite sure. I want to say its thanking him for staying so positive no mater what? (Sorry i'm not always the best at these.)
Also in the line.
"When females flee to mountains you stay low."
I think you mean "Families" (Don't worry i'm bad at spelling myself, I would suggest a prof reader like a do before I publish a story)
Other then that great poem! hope to see more in the future!
Points: 97
Reviews: 4
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