Young Writers Society

Wow! The poem was amazing! I could never think that someone could write a poem on an insane/crazy person like that. It was beautiful, humorous at some points and cool. The pen portrait of a person like that is amazing.
The poem prospers in explaining what it is about and is wonderful.

The poem is structured beautifully.

I loved these lines -
"Just call him crazy and be done with thinking.

Why complicate the issue? It is clear!

Into insanity he’s slowly sinking!

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His fevered brain has obviously been shrinking.

He flinches at my pen as if a spear!

Just call him crazy and be done with thinking"


Overall the poem was very good!

This was great.I like the way you have structured this poem.The character of this crazy person is beautifully portrayed.I loved the way it started and the coherence was amazing.
I liked these lines:

"He stares at stars as if they’re really twinkling!

He dares to call his mother, mother dear!

Just call him crazy and be done with thinking."

And the end stanza was a good finish.It was humorous,I could picture the awkward situation of that crazy man.
He is insane,I loved this work.It was awesome.