I... JUST WHOA... I thought this would be like something
like I walked through something so dark and than I said let there be light or something like that.
not that wouldn't make it bad.
I LOVED THIS. I FEEL AS THOUGH THESE WORDS IN THIS POEM ARE VERY STRONG AND CAN STICK WITH YOU ALL DAY LONG IF YOU LET. I know that for certain that some of it is.
I bet could I just read this everyday. and still not get down all the words . because it so descriptive and so well worded. that will take me a long time to memorize it. which is a good thing. cause that means there is so much to say. and with it being a short poem. it really works well. PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING STUFF LIKE THIS. THIS KIND OF WORK NEEDS TO BE SEEN AND HEARD ALL THE WORLD. PLEASE PLEASE DON'T STOP.
I know for one thing that. I will remember this much of it
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thunderous applause reverberate throughout the spirit realm
as the once-inexistent infinitesimal expands,
swirls and coalesces into stars and then galaxies
through unimaginable eons experienced as mere moments
and gazed upon by wonder-struck, angelic eyes.
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it strikes me and stays with me. its like you are seeing the world around you and lighting it up with these beautiful. which is why I will start trying to memorize
ALL IN ALL REALLY REALLY GREAT WORK. I LOVE VERY MUCH.
THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL WORK
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