Hello there! This is ZeldaIsShiek here to review some more amazing literature and tip the scales in favor of the Red Pandas in order for us to defeat the menace of the Blue team! I am really excited to begin this review. Enough waiting! Nous commencons!
This poem really caught my attention early on because I realized it was very religious from the portrayal of God in this poem. Though I would not like the term "atheist" to be placed upon me, I find the existence of a deity unlikely, so you'd think this poem would not click with me. However, I got a Jehovah's Witness vibe early on, and when I saw the name "Jehovah" used in this, I realized that you are a Jehovah's Witness. And to that I say... cool! I'm glad to see you are so interested in poetry! It is a bit of a trigger for me for reasons better left unmentioned, but I definitely respect you as a Witness and my friend, and I can relate to you on a deeper level than most people for this. I used to go to Kingdom Halls and believe in Jehovah, so I understand this poem a lot.
I really love this poem and I especially love your use of imagery and amazing word choice to deliver an age-old message. I hope you keep writing for the rest of your life and you never stop until the resurrection. Though you may believe in something different than I do, I still love this poem and am ecstatic to find out that we have a religion (at least I used to be a publisher) in common. Have a great day! ZeldaIsShiek- OUT!
P.S. I was never baptized as I am 14. I am not an "apostate" (though by the dictionary definition I am) and I will never try to change your religion. I am not disfellowshipped. You can still talk to me.
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