Oh shooey! Oh booooey.
Oh shooey shooey shoots!
The little bloomin bibbering
Urinated on my boot!
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Oh fooey! Oh gooey!
Oh gooey doooy bain!
Da little bummy bimper
is a dooin it again!
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Oh batty, Oh snatty!
Oh ratty tatty grat!
Why does dat grinnng grimlin
have ta hates me all like that?
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Oh bessy! Oh Fressy!
Ooh fussy fussy fats!
Cuz dats da way da grimy is.
Even Tanta Toes nose dat!
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Wonderful. This really made my day. The sheer humour behind it is brilliant. I love the words and the thing about the boot is awesome.
However, at the end there are TWO pieces of punctuation. Is that really necessary? Hey, I know I’m being picky but that’s what reviews are for, right?
I also think you could finish words, use proper English etc. Although this would bring down the humour level, it would be much easier to read.
Overall, I really liked this. Well done and I hope this helped.
Thanks for the review. Will fix the punctuation typo. Glad you found it humorous. Will see if I can make it more readable.
Wow, As usual your poem rocks. It was way much funnier throughout the poem. Can't take the eyes-off. It sounded awesome.
"You nailed your humor like hammer in these following lines:
Oh fooey! Oh gooey!
Oh gooey doooy bain!
Da little bummy bimper
is a dooin it again!"
You know, I was in the speaker's boot. LOL. I enjoyed it to the core. The whole poem was coherent and was entertaining. You have great humor sense and i guess, you like a lot working on those.
Gray woc, key pee dap. LOL.
Thanks for the review. You were in that boot? LOL! Glad you found the poem funny.
