​Aloft above a cloud an eagle flies

This is another great poem.

Your keen observation is what makes your poem lively, it was well seen through these lines:

"Silently it stares before it dives.

then shattering the silence with its crie,

it plummets towards earth with furrowed brow

expecting frightened scurries down below."

It states the fact that anything with power will be of a smug when something fears for you.

This poem makes me remember a phrase "do someone a power of good." It was felt by the these lines:

"But being human I deploy my gun

and blast it, sending feathers flying high

and in that way of terror cleanse the skies."

From observing your works so far, the specialty of your works is you always see from other view point. Either it be the fish- Bill, bull, dog etc., It adds life to your poem.

Thanks for sharing this poem. The end was justifying.

Hello there!

I love it.

The poem describes the act of hunting from two perspectives: one who hunts for survival and the other who hunts for pleasure. The act of hunting itself has been described so well that it brings about in the reader a feeling of terror.

Lines that I absolutely loved:

the blood it summons glitters crimson red

and in that way of terror cleanse the skies.