That was a really good one. The poem succeeded in explaining what it was about and was beautiful to read. It was easily understandable and relatable as well. What I liked the most was the remarkable simplicity of the poem that really impressed me.
The form of the poem was wonderful. It was well-formed.
These were my favorite lines-
"In my eyes no time has trodden
In my eyes no age has seared.
In my eyes you are a goddess
as the day you first appeared"
SUGGESTIONS- The poem was complete in itself, however, I have some suggestions. You should have added commas(,) after the phrase "In my eyes" in some places. For example-
"In my eyes[,] you are a goddess"
Points: 62
Reviews: 30
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