Hey Radrook, This poem touches upon a very simple topic recognition, acknowledgment these things are often taken for granted, but surely you know the value of a few words of encouragement. For me, this poem also touches upon a much sensitive and debated topic that is mutual existence or coexistence is recognition really necessary are we so insecure about our own existence our own selves that we need someone else to validate it, do we need someone to appreciate us so that we can appreciate ourselves ( so much for independence ) independence is actually dependence on ourselves but the concept of absolute independence is only seen in the movies I think.
Back to your poem, it is really nice, rhythmic and easy to comprehend and relate to.
Keep up the good work
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