Hi Secrete, it’s Dorothy here!
I really like this poem. Nice flow, good punctuation, and a relatable theme! I didn’t see any mistakes and my favorite part of this poem is the theme because it is just so relatable, especially for teenagers, boys and girls. All in all it is a very beautiful and relatable poem. I also like how well the stanzas are separated. Anyways, thats about it!
Totally a ten out of ten from your friend who went over the rainbow!
Happy review day!
Love,
Sarai
Points: 100
Reviews: 42
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