Hey there! Rosie here for a review.
I really enjoyed this, and I'm not a huge fan of poetry. (No judgement, it's just not my strong point.) The flow of the words was really rhythmic, and the idea behind it was intense. It made me remember when I was being controlled in a relationship, and didn't know how to get out of it. I'm a huge fan of romance, and you captured the hot, blisteringly passionate side. Kudos to you, my friend.
Anyway, you captured my attention so well that by the end, I was begging for more. It felt so natural, and it was a really enjoyable read. Good job!
Love,
Rosie.
Points: 407
Reviews: 41
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