I have a lot to say to you
About you behind your back
I have a lot I want to do with you
A lot to never say
I won't say anything
Back when this was innocence
Nothing but a harmless crush
I just happened to be single
You just happened to be not
Of course I didn't know this
Until the worse day of my life
The day I saw you kissing her
Holding her at the dance
So Iw as a little broken
You messed up that bit that loved
For a little while I thought
I would never love again
I blamed this all on you
Except I was the one to blame
You're out of my leauge I know
I'm way too suspicious of other girls
Their intentions and the looks
I seriously like you with a lot of my heart
But I have to deny it
I don't know if you feel the same
I dont' want to feel like a fool again
So sometimes I couldn't tell if you were single
Sometimes I never knew how much you wanted me
Sometimes we both didn't know what to do or what to say
Othertimes I just let you do all the talking
Boy, I love you
When will you understand that I want you?
I want you as mine?
---Dedicated to Roy---
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Hmm.... I didn't notice you were only 11.... I guess ther is some good impact in the world. Live by this, never listen to politicons, don't eat at McDonalds and write till your hands fall off... then proceed to write with your feet untilt hey fall off.
Good! I always seem to be editing them lol!
I was looking at the paper whil I was typing sorry... lol, those are easy to fix... I got more poems coming this way!
Black Rose, I love how you donate all your poems to others. Its so nice that you really write for a good reason.
Anyways, the only thing I see wrong is that you have a few spelling errors.
Good job!
-Dreami