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RavinG

by Elizabeth


This has to be one of the most crappiest and filthiest things I have ever written. Not dirty, but just terrible. I hate it. But raw emotion comes out like this in word form. It's going to, perhaps, be a song one day. It's about my dad... (It's that time of YEAR AGAIN! The annual I Hate My Dad Day! Winner recieves a new Dad!)

I want to scream
LOUD
LOUD
LOUD

In your ears
For all to hear
I want to scream

I hate you
I never liked you
You killed me
Inside

And my mind
Went from straight
To confusion
Because of you

My mind is red
With anger
I hate you
I hate you
HATE
HATE
HATE YOU


Maybe if I go away
You won’t have to
SAY
THOSE WORDS TO ME

I’m sick of your voice
And of the sight of you

Don’t know why but,
This is who I am
And I don’t want to
HELP IT
CHANGE IT
STOP IT

All because of you

I’m afraid of nothing
But your words
And the cold
You put me through
All I can take right now…
Take forever (It was a frozen hell)

O’ sweet Irony!
Sing to me
Let me know
When I can go
O’ sweet joy!
Let me smile
Let me get away
AWAY!


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Sun Feb 19, 2006 2:57 am
Elizabeth says...



Hargh, I love this poem, I take back what I said about it being crap, the ONLY time I'll take that away from ANYTHING I've ever written...

I trust you, that you're coming...

Anyway... Yeah...
Thanks for the comment, any more brave advisaries?




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Sat Feb 18, 2006 8:39 am
deleted6 says...



God i now know how horrible he is how unconsiderate of privacy he is, and i can understand how you hate him so this poem fits perfectly.
Also I promise i'll come and i never break a promise never.





“Sorry about the blood in your mouth. I wish it was mine. I couldn't get the boy to kill me, but I wore his jacket for the longest time.”
— Richard Siken