it all comes to this
this is the final stage
and i'm through
i'm through with your words
your torment
the way you look at me when i'm praised
and the way you scream when you're not
because of you
i've learned not to care
not to love
to speak my mind
to consider opinions that will make me better
I've taught myself
how to hate
how to steal and lie
the price you pay for something you want
and price you pay for your soul
which i and fate, delt out the day i met you
the day you were born
and it all comes to this
you leave me no choice
say your prayers
my dear brother
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Hehehe... brother's don't you just love them?
Ramblings are fine, I ramble a lot.
I liked it. It speaks to me... having a brother myself. Annoying brothers grrr....
I know.. twas a bit cliche in that mannor
but I told you (Misty Lynn) That i'm the one who's getting praised.. and ugh... nobody does nothing for him. He's a little brat ad everything though
i as under a lotta stres when i wrote this....
consider it a ramble.
wow. ok...
well...i suppose it depicts your emotions well. But...everyone has these problems and i know you love your brother for real....
riiiiiiiiiiiiiight....
It will happen as soon as nobody knows who I am.
Nobody can find me
And I get a gun.
Okay when the deed being done lol
Jesu, joy of man's desiring
... to dislike to the upmost my brother.
Holy wisdom, love most bright
Drawn by Thee, our souls aspiring
Soar to uncreated light
Word of God, our flesh that fashioned
With the fire of life impassioned
Striving still to truth unknown
Soaring, dying round Thy throne
(Sorry I had to put it somewhere before I copied something else)
Yes I do....
"Word of God, our flesh that fashioned
With the fire of life impassioned"
In the song maaaaan
God made me with a firey passion
Hate your bro that much? Ha!
Dealed should be delt, but meh.
Wow, I liked it, It was really deep, it got me thinking!