You're insanely confusing
Spell it out with your words
I still won't understand it
Use your wisdom
And make it dance for me
So I can see all the moves you make
Your left eye stares
Into an oblivious world
As you get tangeld up by
Notebooks and words
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And you leave out the most valuable part about it, which is that it's about me.
Work satisfactory? You rated it as poor. Once again you grade on simplicity, not content.
I think it's an excellent poem, very fun.
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ah, i see now--thanks for the clariication
..Okay then.
Awesome poem, TBR! Very creative.
PsyLynx, your icon scares me. Looks just like the eye of my our last drum major... *shudders*
HAHAHAHA, I AM A GOD!
*Takes a bow and smotes thee who does as they do in Egypt (see Levidicus, the chapter where they talk about what you can and cannot have sex with---you'll see that Egypt line in there "Do not do as they do in Egypt." It's hilarious. I, God, wrote that.
Check his current icon.
I like it--short and sweet--the only thing iw as confused about is the reference to the left eye--why the left eye?