Hello!
VioletFantasy here to give you a review. I saw that a few people didn’t like your poem very much down in the comments, but I think it’s awesome! I love how you put it to the tune of “What A Wonderful World”! I think of that as such an uplifting song, so it is really ironic(in the best way possible) that your poem is about the problems in our world. This was a really clever idea and you executed it well. Now, onto the specifics.
I see politics telling lies,
Leaders losing their minds
Bad deals and steals,
From Pakistan to D.C.,
And I think to myself,
What a wonderful world
This is my favorite part of the poem, especially the line about leaders losing their minds. That made me smile and laugh so hard! It’s so true. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this poem and the political details that you included. It adds a lot of interest to it.
I don’t see any grammar/spelling mistakes, so I have nothing else to say. You did such a wonderful job! Keep writing!!
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