I like the way it starts out with a conjuction, because it seems to pull me in right off, but I didn't get a whole lot of feeling, a whole lot of emotion from this poem. I do enjoy the way you play with words though, Morgan, because your poetry is always at least interesting.
I think part of what saved the poem from me really not liking it was the title. Overall, nice work.
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