Wow nice poem. I really like it!
You perfectly captured 'loneliness', which arises in every human being at various situations.
your poem is short, but it's pretty descriptive. I managed to picture a person, with a confused face, standing in the middle of a crowd. This poem doesn't have a significant rhyming scheme, but it's flow is pretty good.
Good job and never stop writing!
Have a good day!!!
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