I wasn't waving,
I was drowning,
In a sea of all
That I'd done wrong.
Did you think I was laughing?
When I was actually crying?
How could you not see,
That I was dying?
How could you not see,
That I was dying?
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it's a bit short to critique, but verses would either make it or break it (forgive the cliched phrase) i'd love to read them, too.
I think verses would be great to, only because you can get a better idea of what the chorus is about by it's verses. Don't like you decide if you want to buy a house by looking at its surrondings.
yes. i think verses would be wonderful.
Awesome! Are there verses to go with it? I'd love to read them if there were...
Cool! If that song came out I'd buy it! Wow!
