In a world where my dignity lies;
Where the hardest part of all,
Was watching it go.
This seems incomplete. Do you want to link it to the beginning? If so, perhaps:
In a world where my dignity lies;
trampled over and forgotten;
where the hardest part of all[s],[/s]
was watching it go.
The ending seems, well, rather vague and slightly boring. A good poem would be the first five lines. It might be short, but it would be awesome XD
-Evang.
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