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by Chevy

Verse 1
Another station's bleeding through
And I heard a better song
And I get the chance to sing again
Should've been listening all along

Sixty miles per hours on a country highway
Show me the way, oh show me the way
To the truth I was looking for
I was needing something more

Show me the exit and where to switch lanes
There must be an escape from all the pain
And I think I finally found the truth
I took one turn and then found You

Verse 2
You saved me from the danger ahead
Gave me a detour before I hit a dead end
You saved my soul and made me whole
With you I've reached my goal

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Tue Dec 25, 2007 7:55 am
Acoustic Sensitivity says...

The words flow well. This would sound good as a song. Though the words were not that impressive but it sounds okay.

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Sun Jul 17, 2005 7:53 pm
Harley says...

It's "where to switch lanes" - i think it sounds okay

overall it's really cool, as your songs always are, but i think you should add more to it. fast. GO! :P

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Sat Jul 16, 2005 1:55 pm
Rei wrote a review...

When I started reading this, I could automatically hear this being put to music. That does not happen very often with me. So congrats on that.

I have no real suggestions to make. But there is one line that I thought was kind of odd, and could do with some rewording:

"Show me the exit and where to the switch lanes."

attempting foot extraction
— Mea