Verse 1
Another station's bleeding through
And I heard a better song
And I get the chance to sing again
Should've been listening all along
Chorus
Sixty miles per hours on a country highway
Show me the way, oh show me the way
To the truth I was looking for
I was needing something more
Show me the exit and where to switch lanes
There must be an escape from all the pain
And I think I finally found the truth
I took one turn and then found You
Verse 2
You saved me from the danger ahead
Gave me a detour before I hit a dead end
You saved my soul and made me whole
With you I've reached my goal
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The words flow well. This would sound good as a song. Though the words were not that impressive but it sounds okay.
It's "where to switch lanes" - i think it sounds okay
overall it's really cool, as your songs always are, but i think you should add more to it. fast. GO!
When I started reading this, I could automatically hear this being put to music. That does not happen very often with me. So congrats on that.
I have no real suggestions to make. But there is one line that I thought was kind of odd, and could do with some rewording:
"Show me the exit and where to the switch lanes."