Hello, JLC here! I know this work was posted a very long time ago. I know I shouldn't be reviewing it because it'll annoy someone.
But I also know that this deserves a like, and to be once again brought up! I've started reading older work posted on here to derive inspiration and get a sense of what this site used to be about. your work is definitely captivating.
This poem rolled off the tongue and was magnificent in every single way! Everything was properly punctuated and capitalized and flowed beautifully! I'd love to look back at some more of your old works and see how you as a writer has progressed.
With love, JLC
Points: 3
Reviews: 4
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