It’s not like anyone cares.
Or (can)even see you there.
It’s not like anyone hears.
Or see(s) in you in (your) tears.
It’s not like anyone knows,
Because you don’t let it show.
All of it stays inside,
Away from the world; you hide.
No one knows what you see,
Or why you('ll) -will- never be free.
It’s you and the things that you feel inside.
And away from the world; you will forever hide
I liked this poem a lot. It relates to a lot of readers, and the rhyming scheme is practically perfect. What I added is what I thought would make the poem flow better You're an awesome poet. KEEP WRITING!
Points: 2168
Reviews: 183
Donate