Thank you all for the likes! <3
11 am in the afternoon,
Gotta gotta get on YWS, gotta get on chat.
Gotta have laughs, gotta have my butts.
Seein' all the works, watching for reviews.
Time to get to that review. But I don't want to!
Gotta get down to the kitchen,
Gotta eat, but I just can't, cause Sean just walked in!
Kickin’ in lounge
Sittin’ in Chat room A
Gotta make my mind up
Which RPG?
It’s Thursday, Thursday,
Gotta get to chat on Thursday,
Everybody’s lookin' forward to the music,
Thursday, Thursday,
Gotta get to chat on Thursday,
Everybody’s lookin’ forward to the music
chattin' Chattin' (Yeah)
chattin', chattin' (Yeah)
Fun, fun, fun, fun
Lookin’ forward to the music
[Rebecca Black - Verse 2]
11:45, we’re singing Disney musicals,
Singing so wonderful, we could be on broadway.
Fun, fun, think about fun
You know what it is
I got this, you got this
My chat is where it's at!
I got this, you got this
Now you know it
PMing her.
Pming him.
Gotta PM my people for the laughs!
Gotta gotta PM them!
[Chorus]
It’s Thursday, Thursday,
Gotta get to chat on Thursday,
Everybody’s lookin' forward to the music,
Thursday, Thursday,
Gotta get to chat on Thursday,
Everybody’s lookin’ forward to the music
chattin' Chattin' (Yeah)
chattin', chattin' (Yeah)
Fun, fun, fun, fun
Lookin’ forward to the music
[Bridge]
Yesterday was Review day,
Today it-is Thursday, Thursday,
We-we-we so excited
We so excited
We gonna have a bann today!
Tomorrow is Friday,
And Saturday comes afterwards...
I don’t want this chat to ever end!
[Rap Verse]
Demi, Stells, Persy they so chilling.
So chillin’ in the lounge.
In the place where mods sit.
their watching and lurking
laughing and sing
Wit' the laughs! WOOT
(C’mon) Passin by the Chat rooms
Make straight for the lounge
Check my time, it’s Thursday,
We gonna have fun, c’mon, c’mon, y’all
[Chorus]
It’s Thursday, Thursday,
Gotta get to chat on Thursday,
Everybody’s lookin' forward to the music,
Thursday, Thursday,
Gotta get to chat on Thursday,
Everybody’s lookin’ forward to the music
chattin' Chattin' (Yeah)
chattin', chattin' (Yeah)
Fun, fun, fun, fun
Lookin’ forward to the music
It’s Thursday, Thursday,
Gotta get to chat on Thursday,
Everybody’s lookin' forward to the music,
Thursday, Thursday,
Gotta get to chat on Thursday,
Everybody’s lookin’ forward to the music
chattin' Chattin' (Yeah)
chattin', chattin' (Yeah)
Fun, fun, fun, fun
Lookin’ forward to the music
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OMG!!!!HAAHAHAH!!!! Rebecca Black must be SOOOOOO popular these days!!! Need to hear you sing this. Although this was the most adorable and histarical parody I have ever heard!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
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Hello SparkOfDoubt,
Snoink already brought this up but it caught my eye too and I really didn't get it. How do you 'have my butts' in a YWS chat room? Just a little something that you should consider rephrasing or something. It doesn't make much sense at the moment and it would be nice to see it being fixed.Wow, this was the most insanely awesome parody I have ever seen. It shows just what Young Writers Society is all about and it has little things that only is YWSers could understand. I think that's what makes it special, to me anyway! It also sticks very closely to the tune and it isn't inflowing or unbalanced it is just right and it is very well thought out! Now on with the review! Please don't take my advice offensively. I thought this was really cool!
I couldn't find any other strange things about this and the punctuation and spelling all looked great to me. I like how you have punctuated this even though it is song lyrics which don't tend to have much punctuation. It was a nice little touch and it gave it an almost poem like feel that most songs seem to lack. In the grammar area you seems to be an expert so well done!
Finally YOU SHOULD TOTALLY SING THIS AND POST IT ON YOUTUBE I WANNA' SEE IT ON YOUTUBE SO BADLY AND IT IS PERFECT AND I JUST LOVE IT SO MUCH AND I CAN'T BELIEVE IT ISN'T ALREADY ON YOUTUBE BECAUS EIT IS CLEVER AND FUNNY AND IT SHOULD SO BE ON YOUTU--.. Okay but seriously, this was amazing and I would love to hear it being sung, so if you don't mind i think you should seriously consider posting this on youtube!
Overall this was very cool and I loved reading it so much! Please post more stuff like this! It made my day and I loved it so much! Keep up that amazing work and if you have a question or would like another review please PM me and I will try and be as helpful as possible!
From DreamingForever
Loved it! Lol so loud! reminds me of the lyrics my friends and I sing in class to this song. Although, we never actualy write them down or remember them. this was way better than any of ours since we never get to all the verses. Could not find anything wrong with it, and I aree with previous posts that I want to se it sung on youtube and shared with us.
...You just blew my mind. O.o
Hahaha, I shuffled right to this!
Okay, there were several bits that I kind of wondered about. And yes, I am probably over-thinking this too much, but
Uh... do you typically get butts in the chat room? O_o
But... review day usually happens on Saturday/Sunday. So, it seems weird that you would call this "Thursday."
Anyway, just a couple of thoughts! ^^
And this review just made me smile more
I absolutely loved this this. Haha. Very creative and hilarious. Can't wait to read more of your works ^^. Good luck. I couldn't find anything wrong with spelling and it seems to have rhymed rather well. Hope you get very many reviews ^^. Soulkana<3
Hilarious!!
I agree, post on youtube!! 
You. Sing this. Post the video on youtube. Share it with YWS. IMMEDIATELY.
That is all.
One thing I really should say about this is that it is without a doubt truly THE MOST EPIC THING I HAVE EVER SEEN IN MY ENTIRE LIFE I MEAN! OMGGEEE!! ehehehehe yeah, it's 3AM here -.-