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Hi there!
This is a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. It was written very well and there aren't any spelling or grammer errors I could find. It also flows well and sticks to the main idea quite well. Here's my favorite part:
This is so true. Most people go through life not even thinking about what they are doing.
Overall this is a great poem. Keep writing!
I Loved it! Especially the first part
I feel the same way a lot of the time. Thank you for writing this, and I disagree with it being stupid, I thought it was awesome. So great work, and please keep writing.
~Zanna Shepherd
I liked this a lot. It made me think. I believe that the Seas of Gold is kind of like fitting in. And everything you said in the poem made me think about a person trying to be themselves but getting roped into the crowd... you know? Anyway... that's my way of saying I loved this. It was great and it made me think, plus it came from your heart, I can tell. I really hope to see more of your work! Haha. 4 owls out of 5! Great job!
~ Owl