An angel sent from heaven above.
A Christmas story
Dedicated to my little sister.
Olivia didn’t have any parents. She didn’t have any friends. She lived in an old house all alone. Then one night (Christmas Eve to be exact), a knock came to the door. Olivia opened it praying to the lord that it was someone: come to help her. It was. It was the angel Gabriel and he said three words to Olivia “Do not worry.” Then in a puff of gold, he was gone. And in his place was a smaller angel: named Gabriella. Gabriella led Olivia to people who would take care of her. She led her to a home, something she had never known.
Christmas day Gabriella was given a choice: stay with Olivia or go back to Heaven: a heroine. She stayed with Olivia till she died. And when she did, Gabriella joined her, best friends forever.
And as the two walked through the Holy Gates Olivia murmured “God bless, everyone” and he did.
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hehe love it! <3
~Missy~