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Wow. That was pretty dark. I love it though.
As far as I could see, there weren't any mistakes. I thought that you structured this really well. I don't think I've ever read a poem about murder though. You did really well! I hope to see a lot more from you! If you have any questions on anything, please don't be afraid to ask. 
Keep on writing!!!
--Jalmoc