I've been roaming around.

Ok, this is AWESOME!! ^u^ I love the message, the meaning, the theme, the words, the feeling. . .Heck, I love it all ^u^

I love how you compleatly executed a deep and emotional poem with only one small paragraph ^u^

Aside from the little 'heart's' blip everyone bellow me found, It's perfect ^u^

My favorite line is;

"my tears stained the glass of every holy word."

It was hard to pickk a favorite line, since they were all amazing ^^

I love it, and please keep writing ^u^

I really liked this! The way you used the metaphorical imagery so well was awesome. You were able to convey so much with so little, and I appreciate that. It seems to me that the shortest poems contain the most meaning; They're not diluted with too many words.
Anyway, the only technical issue I saw, was the same one eyeofthestorm already pointed out. So everything checks out conventions and layout wise.
I do however, disagree with fairyreader; I think that pleas worked just fine for how you used it, but if you feel that you should change it that's your decision.
Overall a very good piece.
My rating: 9/10
My favourite part: "my pleas are ignored for what they're worth"

Keep it up!

w&w

This is so cute! I love the song 'use sombody'. So I decided I had to cheack out this poem even though its not my genre.
I loved the imagery used.

I like this line:

'My pleas are ingored for what they're worth'

Though i dont think 'pleas' fit. This sentence dosent seem as effective to me as the other 3. 'Pleas' just dosent seem to fit.

I dont know. As I said, this isnt a genre I know much about! I did enjoy reading this though! x

I really like your poem, but I noticed you have an apostrophe in the word hearts that doesn't need to be there.
Other than that, very good. I like it a lot.