This is Weirdo, here with a review for review day (sorry, it took so long). The usual stuff-
Please know that nothing in this review is meant to offend you or your work. This is just my opinion, you and other readers and reviewers could disagree. You also might want to completely ignore this, after all, it's just the opinion of a random person in the middle of somewhere. Sorry if I miss read something or misunderstood something and pointed it in the review. I didn't have the time to go through the previous reviews, so sorry if I repeat something already said.
That being said, let's get into this review.
Let me start by saying, amazing topic, I agree on it completely, and now for the criticising part,
One thing I have noticed is that you stick to a very particular format while writing poetry. This is not exactly bad, but if you would not punctuate every line, it wouldn't be bad either.
I personally believe that poetry should not be bound to a format or a strict rhyme scheme, and if you find it helpful, you could try to experiment this way and see what happens. This kind of form would be amazing for this poem... according to me.
Hope this helps
Weirdo out
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