Hello there sister! (Why am i addressing everyone as sister these days!!) O.O
~Because they're girls.
~And you love your sisters!
Anyway! Otter here not to read and leave but to review (hopefully!) I was actually thinking about this, not exactly this but kind of the same issue myself. All those dating thing i can see everywhere and about love. So, pretty glad i found it!
Now, your work is good. It contains a message and these days, it's a regular topic. Lot like our countless social problems. Youngsters can't differentiate between LOVE and DATING or RELATIONSHIP or whatever you prefer. And, tell you what! Nor can i! XD But, i can't because i don't want to and don't think about it much, got loads other to think about! (Last night i dreamt about T.Rex, currently thinking about that o.o)
Yes, i can definitely understand that you've written this in a hurry, as, there are few errors, if you proofread it, you'll find them yourself! Don't tell me you don't want me to point some out for you?
Like, see here,
To do anything for getting a person
is what is called as love
I guess double use if is.
Here,
relationship being pleasure of mating,
stands on its separate place
I think, just think.. something's wrong here :3 Can't get what though..
As i said, a little revise and you'll find them!
Now, pretty good use of punctuations, i think the format could've been better. And, you've also bolded few NOTs (why?!) Few capitalisation fixing is needed. So, if you get time, do some editing!
So, great work overall. Quite liked it! Bye for now.
*jumps outside*
~Otter
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