OH, MY GOD! THIS IS AN UNIQUE PIECE OF WORK! REALLY IT TOUCHED ME!! THE DESCRIPTIONS WERE SO GOOD. I ACTUALLY SAW AN AMAZING MOVIE HERE. THE EMOTION WAS SO STRONG AND GOOD. I'M ASHAMED THAT IT TOOK TIME TO READ THIS.
I'VE BEEN POSTPONING THIS BLISS. THE CONSTRUCTION OF SENTENCES ARE PRETTY GREAT!
I was once so proud of being a creation of creation. I liked my fair color, which made me more precious than the rough and coffee-colored ones.
At first, I thought what must this creation of creation be? then you surprise me with this line,
I was happy in my new home, where I, along with my cardboard house, was kept in a wooden cupboard. The boy used my parts, one by one and after using me, he would transfer me to a different home.
You've got no idea what I felt like reading these:
The home was of a girl. A human girl. Perhaps he loved her. Slowly as I was getting used up, the boy was growing old, and so was the girl.
One day, I don't know what happened, but the girl started to share the boy's house. Later I came to know, they were married. But the boy who was no longer a teen,didn't stop using me. He would give it to the girl, who was now a woman would hang me up on the wall, or keep me in a showcase. I was happy to see that the woman brought my older parts along with her. I was happy to see my parts together, some hung up on the walls and some locked up in a showcase.
You see, you've given a non-living a life to narrate the story plus you have added romance here and the respect, affection for it and deem it as their symbol of love. I just loved it!
WOW! Your writing style !!
Out of the remaining 15 parts of mine, she pulled one out of the house. She told me the reason for her tears. I was shocked when I came to know that the old man, who bought me when he was young was no more. A tear fell down over me from her eyes. I was sensitive to water and her tears peeled off my skin.
This was so touching. Was just blown away.
Before the fire engulfs my half-charred skin, I just want you to know that I always served him as best I could, as a simple pack of blank white paper
I just have no words, you ended it so well with your as usual amazing style. I'M SO SO SO HAPPY READING THIS ONE!! IT'S MY FAVORITE ^^
I learn a lot from your writing actually. It's been a pleasure reading your works.
KEEP UP THE AWESOME WRITING!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LETTING ME KNOW, MY FRIEND.
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