In the digital world moving ahead on the wheels of the vehicle called technology, books are fading away, becoming endangered like the sweet little sparrows.
The sparrow is a bird. The eagle is a bird. But the two are so diverse. Their strength differs. Their vision differs. Their capacity differs. Their nature differs. Their feather differs.
The book is a data or content. The computer is a data or content. But the two are so divers just like the sparrow and the eagle.
Let the sparrow transform into an eagle now. Let the wings of the books strengthen enough to bear our weights while we fly in the sky and take a tour to the world far away from the reality. The world of imaginations where there are kings and queens, the dwarfs and the giants, and the fairies and witches. Let the grip of the sparrow tighten as strong as the eagle, so that we don't fall off while we are riding their backs, going on the adventure of fiction.
Touch is missing while reading online. Online reading is damaging our eyes. We are reading an interesting piece and suddenly an annoying whatsapp notification pops up. So many distractions are there online. Books gives comfort to eyes. We can touch and feel the books.
Indeed there are many advantages of technology and soft copies over the books and hard copies. But a book is a book and we should not forget them. They are the traditional way of writing and reading. We should keep the tradition alive.
Indeed internet has made things very easy. But at the same time, we should be grateful to the books that started this wonderful idea of spreading message, conveying thoughts, expressing feelings of tearful grief, deep lament, pure love, strong opposition, putting light on morals, teaching life lessons and so many other thoughts and feelings.
I take an oath...
It was the book that started it. We will never let the books become extinct and we will always respect them and keep the tradition alive. We will not forget them in the schedule so busy online.
Dear readers it was just a little piece of thoughts weaved together in an article. No debates are an intention for the topic of books are better or the technology is better. :D
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Hey, Eros!
The title of the article is a clever choice. I adore the way you give the titles to your work, and that upheaves the content.
I just loved this article. Awesome correspondence between a book and the sparrow. It is indeed true, sparrows are becoming endangered now so are books.
We are very comfortable when books are in our hands and reading online does affect the eyes. Good point.
The technologies develop, the impact of its growth has taken it's toll in either things: sparrows, tender beings which suffer through the radiations of the mobile towers and the decline of paperback published books.
So true are the following lines, i adore the way it is said.
Oh my God, you climbed the peak of imagination, pal in these following lines. Guess who is the eagle now?
YES!! This happens, so true. Applauses for stating it here.
For your kind info, in case you didn't notice. there is this typo error in the word 'interesting'
Perfect conclusion given in these lines.
These following lines personally spoke to me, the readers will take the advice earnestly. I respect your thought and join in the oath
Thanks for sharing this amazing piece.
Keep up the writing. Enjoyed the read.
Thank you so much @Sree !! Oh yes ... That's a typo there ... Have corrected it ...
You're welcome
That's great!
Please feel free to ignore my advice it is not meant to demean you your story make it seem bad or offend you that said brave yourself for impact.
1. Formatting
Okay you have a beautiful array of thoughts and a amazing way of talking about books and computers but know that you have your thoughts down maybe you could try turning them into two paragraphs. Just thought I'd suggest that.
2. General
Okay so I have a feeling these two lines could be redone
The sparrow is a bird. The eagle is a bird. But the two are so diverse. Their strength differs. Their vision differs. Their capacity differs. Their nature differs. Their feather differs.
The book is a data or content. The computer is a data or content. But the two are so divers just like the sparrow and the eagle.
I would try this
The sparrow is a bird. The eagle is a bird. But the two are so diverse the same can be said for the book and the computer- The book is a data or content. The computer is a data or content. But the two are so divers just like the sparrow and the eagle.
So getting back to the formatting subject I think you could try something like the above to have longer paragraphs.
By the way even if you don't wan't a debate I still heartily agree.
I hope this helps
Have a great day!!!(:
Thank you so much, Katnes !! I will consider your suggestions...
I like it a lot
#SparrowToEagle