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Hey, felistia -- I'm BellaRoma here with a review on this piece.
I'll be brief, so I don't repeat too much, okay?
I agree that this is a really relevant message -- we need to work harder to conserve the beautiful animals we have, like tigers.
Was this at all inspired by "The Tyger" by William Blake? It was a poem I studied in English last year. I saw it marked as fanfiction, so I thought I'd ask. "Tyger, tyger burning bright", is the first line of that poem, too. If it was inspired by "The Tyger", I like the way you have taken the poem and turned it into this to share your views.
I'm not going to include nitpicks -- you have probably heard everything by now. Sorry this review couldn't have been more helpful to you. I mainly wanted to ask about your poem.

~BellaRoma~

Hello, InfiniteRectangles here with your review!

Wow, this was so amazing! I see that it has gotten lots of well-deserved attention as well. As someone who absolutely loves tigers, I really appreciate this poem and the message behind it. This is such a powerful poem that it is hard to find any criticism for you. I love the way you made the tiger feel alive. You painted a picture in your readers minds that is so beautifully vivid! (And I must admit, I am slightly envious of your ability to master imagery so well :p) You put so much passion into this piece, and as a poet, passion is crucial for a successful poem. I could feel how much you care about the tiger by the way you described everything. Really, the only thing I would suggest is to keep your tenses consistent. There was a part towards the end where you switched from present to past tense and then at the end you switched back to present. It may just be a stylistic choice of yours (and seeing as this is your poem, I won't really be too nit-picky about it), but I think it might improve the flow if you keep the tenses consistent.

That is all I have for you. Overall this was a brilliant poem. It was beautifully descriptive, it flowed well, most of your rhymes felt natural, and it was powerful. I have read some of your other work and I am becoming quite fond of your writing style. Keep writing and have a wonderful day/night! ^-^

A very intriguing and inspiring poem with a vital message to us all. Well written

Very lovely poem, very lovely message. Reading through I could only find one mistake and then the rest I will be talking about is personal changes I would make.
The one tiny problem would be "As you haunt the forests no man dares tread." should be "As you haunt the forests no man (dare) tread.", I just think it would much better without the s on dares, and would help with the overall flow of the poem.
Now, onto personal changes. My personal changes would be with spacing, I think you should split the line "But now, long sorrow-filled years," so it would have looked like"But now, (Indention) Long sorrow filled years," but doing so could also ruin the flow of the poem, I'm just saying that its just natural for me to do this to my own poems.

Wow ! This is a complete piece of poetry . The poem has moved on so systematically. The description is also very realistic . And the best part is that , it has such a solid conclusion with a message .

I literally looked at a the poem this is based off to see if it was a copy paste. It wasn't. That's how good it was. XD

Thank you for making this! As someone who loves tigers dearly, this touched my heart.

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Hey, I'm here to review as requested. I see that this is a rhyming poem, and I like them that are rhymed. I simply don't understand why some people don't. Rhyme is a wonderful thing. Anyway, I'm off the track a bit, so let's go it again.

The thing about rhyming poem is that it's not just making your last word rhyming with the last one in the line after that. After being commented on some rhymed poems I made, I realized there was more to rhyme. There are perfect rhyme, general rhyme, and identical rhyme. In perfect rhyme, there's full rhyme and identical rhyme. Whatever it is, it's crucial to stick into one type of rhyme. More can be read here.

Tiger, tiger, burning bright,
Your eyes like fierce firelight.

Your long striped fur blazing flame red,
As you haunt the forests no man dares tread.

Wow ! Such a great poem !
It's so easy to read and to understand !
It's really great that it rhymes the whole way through ! It makes the poem flow nicer, and gives it a rhythm !
It also has a powerful meaning, but is addressed in an easy way, which makes it fun for younger readers as well.
It makes you think about man's greed, and his blindness to the beauty of what surrounds him !
I really loved this poem ! It's wonderful !

You've written a splendid poem! Honestly, I loved every word of it, but like every poem it could do with some improvements. I'll you advice to remove the image of a tiger and let the readers conjure up an image themselves, that's why I love vague book covers because they leave the imagination to me. The last line, "Fading from all man's sight", seems slightly out of place to me and you could refine it. The best part of this poem was its descriptive and vivid imagery, I simply loved it. You write very well and I look forward to reading more of your works!
P.S. I'm new and have recently posted a poem. I'll be very grateful if you could spare a moment to have a look it.

Greetings again! I've returned, hoping to squeeze in another review (by request ) before Review Day finishes!

I have noticed that this one has a slightly different format than your other poems. I am pleased to tell you that this works very well, especially for the type of poem it is and your rhyme scheme. You haven't messed up (Hopefully nobody was looking over your shoulder as you wrote, yelling "Mess up! Mess up! Mess up!") on this, doing this quite masterfully.
Moving on to your fabulous description..... 10/10. Is it realistic to say that your poem outperforms the picture? I can feel it and see it so much! They say a picture is worth a thousand words, but your poem is probably worth a billion (even though its not even that long)!

For man hunts you for your coat of fire,

In his hands a gun, his eyes full of desire.

Hello, I am here to review.

First of all, this was a really good poem. Very nice poetic language, very nice form, very nice flow. Congratulations. I really like this poem and I like the idea you are sending out with it, for it is a good gesture to the world.

However, there are some things I would like to point out. First things first:

Tiger, tiger burning bright

But now long sorrow filled years,

But now, long sorrow-filled years,

He hunted you over mountains high and valleys low,

hello my name is Hannah and here is my review.
I like how you have added a photo of the tiger it gives the reader a visual image.
I have also noticed that you have not made any spelling or grammar errors which is great and is also crucial when writing poems and stories etc. Anyway overall I really like this poem and I think that it is amazing and I think you should keep up the good work

normally i don't like/understand poems but this one i truely understand, and could discribe in my own words. i could have understood maybe a website link or shown as the very bottom of the page where they try to save tigers and other big cats because really nice porms like this can perfectly inspire prople to make a diffrence, although i do thnk "and shot away your red firelight" would have been better due to part about him holding a gun. and maybe putting evil before desire? just a suggestion.
-el