Hello again Felistia! I'm back for a short review!
This is quite interesting. I wasn't quite expecting this specifically from a poem about spring, but this is way better. You've gone to quite some interesting things in your poem. You demonstrate them wonderfully. Your poem has a nice rhythm to it, which adds to the whole spring feeling. I'd have to say that my favorite part are the last seven lines. I'm not sure why, but they just seem so interesting.
Anyway, wonderful poem yet again!
Never stop writing!
~Holographic Ladybug
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