Hello I'm here to review your poem
So, let me start with, I absolutely love this poem. It is the epitome of something/one toxic, something/one you don't need. You describe all the emotions so perfectly.
now let me actually critique.
Like one of the last few reviews, I don't think sick needs to be "s i c k". I get that you wanted emphasis on that specific emotion but for some reason I can't exactly take that seriously? sorry if that sounds rude, but personally it seems a little childish?
otherwise I didn't see any other problems. I did really love this poem. the imagery was spot on and I loved it.
have an Amazing day!!
>Adrian
Points: 167
Reviews: 54
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